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Honorable Mention
Fog Found
Gary Blankenship

Fog Found

(Bleak House, Dickens.)

Fog. Up the river.
Where it flows among green aits and meadows.
Fog. Down the river.
Where it rolls defiled among tiers of shipping.
And waterside pollution of a great city.
A dirty city.

dirty fog,
dirty water,
dirty feet on dirty children
lost in fog,
their dirty catch
caught in muddy cat claws


Fog. On the Essex marshes.
On the Kentish heights.
Creeps into cabooses of collier brigs.
Lies out on yards.
Hovers in rigging of great ships.
Droops on gunwales of barges and small boats.

horns sound
fog horns
muffled sounds
appear to be over there
over here
until small boats
caught in steamer’s clutches


Fog. In eyes and throats of ancient Greenwich pensioners.
Wheezing by firesides of their wards.
In stem and blow of the afternoon pipe of the wrathful skipper.
Down in his close cabin.
Cruel. Pinches toes and fingers of the shivering ‘prentice boy on deck.

shiver
boys might slumber
but fog’s chill
fog’s will
to dampen boy and pipe alike
matches cannot catch


Chance people. On the bridges peep over parapets.
A nether sky of fog.
Fog. All around them.
As if they are in a balloon.
Hung in the misty clouds.

ballons
fat people float
above thin
well fed float
in a heap
coats caught in clouds


Gas looms through the fog.
Fog. In divers places in the streets.
As the sun may. From spongy fields.
Be seen to loom by husbandman and ploughboy.
The shops lighted two hours before their time.
As the gas seems to know.
It haggard and unwilling.

smile
notice
fog covers the ugly mean
cringe
know
fog covers the mean ugly
be careful
not be caught in the river’s clutches


Fog.




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Author's Note:
The regular text is from Chapter 1 of Bleak House by Charles Dickens, rearranged and slightly rewritten by the author.

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